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About Me Member Photo Manipulator GallileaFemale/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 2 Years
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UPDATE 3/9/09

Mon Mar 9, 2009, 4:18 PM
WELL it's been a long time! I haven't had much to say, but I have a big update right here.

I GOTS MUSE!!!!
Oh yes folks. I got a story coming. Not a random excerpt... a story. I won't post part one until I get at least three parts; I want to keep this one going. I know how it's going to go. And you won't like the ending, I'm willing to guess.

Anyway... it's going to be sort of a love story, character development thing. And I've never really done a love story, not unless you count my little shorties. It's about Lydia St. Clare and Peter Cambridge. Peter is Lydia's best friend and has loved her for a long time... it takes Lydia, however longer to find those feelings. And she just might be too late.

The story is inspired by a Walt Whitman poem titled, "O Captain! My Captian!" so tha's the working title until I think of something else.

"Oh Captain! My Captain!"
O captain! My captain!
our fearful trip is done.
The ship has weather'd every rack,
the prize we sought is won.
The port is near, the bells I hear, the people all exulting-
while follow eyes the steady keel, the vessel grim and daring.
But o heart! heart! heart!
O the bleeding drops of red
where on the deck my captain lies,
fallen cold and dead.

O captain, my captain!
Rise up and hear the bells.
Rise up, for you the flag is flung,
for you the bugle trills.
For you bouquets and ribbon'd wreaths,
for you the shores a-crowding.
For you they call the swaying mass, their eager faces turning.

Here captain! Dear father!
The arm beneath your head,
it is some dream that on the deck you've fallen cold and dead.

My captain does not answer,
his lips are pale and still.
My father does not feel my arm,
he has no pulse nor will.

The ship is anchored safe and sound,
its voyage closed and done.
From fearful trip the victor ship comes in with object won!

Exalt o shores! And ring o bells!
But I with mournful tread.
Walk the deck my captain lies,
fallen cold and dead.

O Captain, o captain, our fearful trip is done.
The ship has weather'd every rack, the prize we sought is won.
The port is near, the bells I hear, the people all exulting!
While follow eyes the steady keel, the vessel grim and daring.
Captain! O captain! My captain! My captain!

~galli

  • Mood: Triumph
  • Listening to: "Yes" Coldplay
  • Reading: The Great Gatsby

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  • Interests: marching band, Latin, art, literature, music, Shakespeare
  • Favourite movie: Juno, Hairspray, Anastasia
  • Favourite band or musician: Dashboard Confessional, Colbie Callait, KT Tunstall, Boys Like Girls
  • Favourite genre of music: Alternative
  • Favourite artist: pronounced you, kriswilson
  • Favourite poet or writer: Jodi Picoult
  • Favourite photographer: PersephoneStock, PhotoStockMarket, IntergalacticStock
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:iconarafel3873:
Thanks for the fav!
:iconahopefulregret:
Thanks for the fav

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:iconlunarsparks:
Thank you for the favourite! :thanks:

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:iconsolemnheart4:
hay betch. those shoes are three hundred dollars. we need to hang. like soon. boo.

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:iconragingleru:
I'm not tryin to be mean. I'm just in a bad mood Sorry :(

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:icongallilea:
Sorry... but you really should post the links to the stockers you used. I only say that because I almost got iced on DA for copyright infringement (did I already say that?) and I always appreciate a good critique. After all, you can't get better unless you work at it!

Much better than my first attempts though... took me forever to appropriately use a smudge brush. 8D

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:iconragingleru:
xD I stinka t graphics xD :3 BAHAHA.

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:iconnosyd:
Thanks for the fave :)

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:iconsolemnheart4:
thanks for the fave!

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:iconaslikolcu:
thanks a lot for the :+fav: ^^

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